tripping down the sidewalk
in the lower part of town
going to the guitar store
my e-string’s come unwound
a tune is humming in my head
for words i’ve yet to write
and then i see you through the glass
all dressed in bakers white
ohhh mercy, sakes alive
i slow my steps and strain to look
without giving it a thought
i see you, and you see me
i know that i’ve been caught
maybe i should walk on by
be a gentleman this day
the heck with that, i’ll take a chance
this boy, he came to play
ohhh mercy sakes alive
just look at what you’ve gone and done
when i see you roll those buns
hot bread baking in the oven
but it’s you, oh girl, that i’m lovin
your hair is pulled back in a net
there’s flour everywhere
you glance at me and knead the dough
i barely take in air
you got that look that speaks to me
and yeah, i speak to you
together we can bake all day
have our cake, and it eat, too
ohhh mercy, sakes alive
just look at what you’ve gone and done
when i see you roll those buns
hot bread baking in the oven
but it’s you, oh girl, that i’m lovin
my legs are weak, can’t wait to eat,
but it’s you, oh girl, i’m lovin’
copyright 2017, joseph e bird
Editor’s Note: In his Noble Prize acceptance speech, Bob Dylan said his work is meant to be sung, that it’s not complete as a simple rhyming poem. Same here with my so-called songs. Of course I ain’t no Robert Zimmerman, but I am, in fact, fooling around with music for these little ditties. Someday I may present them as fully imagined. Probably not, but you never know.
June 12, 2017 at 8:40 am
Here is a great stanza:
your hair is pulled back in a net
there’s flour everywhere
you glance at me and roll the dough
i barely take in air
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June 12, 2017 at 8:54 am
Thanks, Larry.
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June 13, 2017 at 9:58 pm
Go for it! Make it music!
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June 13, 2017 at 10:00 pm
Have I mentioned that I’m delusional?
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