Logline: The pitch you give to Spielberg when you see him at Hillbilly Hotdogs. 30-35 words, one sentence.
Logline for A Prayer for Rain:
A rising musician’s dreams of stardom are shattered in a debilitating accident, and as he rebuilds his life he discovers new ways to express himself musically, but struggles against the seductions of fame.
May 8, 2016 at 9:32 pm
One minor comment: Two conjunctions makes for a really long sentence. Suggest breaking into two sentences by putting period where first comma is and delete “and”.
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May 8, 2016 at 9:36 pm
You are correct, but one sentence is the “rule”, though I can’t imagine a writing career being ruined by a 2-sentence log line.