Another random paragraph from my novel in progress.
He turned to look at Dani.
The glow from the street lights moved across her face, highlighting her features before leaving her obscured in shadow. As if there were two versions of the same person. The woman of light who quickens his heart and brings forth thoughts that he had willed himself to suppress. She of ankle boots and smooth skin and hair of fire. And the one who lives quietly in the dimness, who understands his thoughts and challenges his mind, who without even trying is as alluring and comforting as a soft song in the evening.
A friend.
copyright joseph e bird, 2015
September 27, 2015 at 9:35 am
Wonderful Post
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September 27, 2015 at 9:37 am
Thanks, Mukul.
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September 27, 2015 at 9:37 am
welcome
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September 27, 2015 at 1:55 pm
This is excellent. You’re getting better as you go.
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September 27, 2015 at 5:27 pm
Thanks, Larry. And thanks for the re-blog.
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September 27, 2015 at 8:06 pm
yo
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September 27, 2015 at 1:55 pm
Reblogged this on Shelton College Quarterly.
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September 27, 2015 at 11:08 pm
I’m all about some progress … Keep it up, y’hear??! 😉
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September 28, 2015 at 7:26 am
For a bit longer, anyway. Thanks, Ashley.
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September 28, 2015 at 8:24 am
This is really nice, Joe. I enjoyed it.
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September 28, 2015 at 8:30 am
Thanks, Sarah. How’s your writing going? Haven’t heard from you in a while.
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October 4, 2015 at 10:39 pm
Hi Joe,
Writing is going well! I spent the summer working with a novel editor, and it helped quite a lot! Hoping to query soon. How’s your novel coming along?
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October 5, 2015 at 7:40 am
I’m a little more than halfway through my latest.
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October 6, 2015 at 11:31 pm
There was something very intimate about this vignette. It is engaging in a way that almost hurts. Good writing, I’d say.
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October 7, 2015 at 8:04 am
Thanks. BTW, I borrowed your last name to use for Dani.
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