a glance of the eye, the innocent look
the curl of your lips, was all that it took
we talked without words, there was so much to say
my world went to sleep, when you went away
the hollow of lonely
it shakes me with fear
i whisper hello
but nobody’s here
the care in your heart, always ready to share
you left me so humbled, my sins so aware
to witness your goodness, i now realize
it’s what i should live for, to be good in your eyes
i long for your warmth
and to kiss your sweet tears
i whisper hello
but nobody’s here
the devil he tempts, the weak ones to test
he knows how to charm, my lust is impressed
my life is now stained, there’s nothing to do
but beg your forgiveness, your judgment is true
to touch your soft skin
and hold you so dear
i whisper hello
but nobody’s here
the sound of your voice, echoes soft in my mind
i wish i could see you, for all others i’m blind
our love was so fleeting, and me, i’m to blame
i dream of the light, and live with my shame
please laugh for me honey
and bring joy to my ear
i whisper hello
but nobody’s here
copyright 2016, joseph e bird
author’s note: this is not autobiographical and i’m not depressed or missing anyone. i’ve been listening to a lot of “love gone wrong” songs lately and this is my contribution to the genre.
December 10, 2016 at 10:20 am
Well done. This was lovely and smooth, I liked it. 🙂
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December 10, 2016 at 10:21 am
Thanks, IB.
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December 10, 2016 at 10:23 am
Excellent. Maybe Dwight will pick it up. Really.
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December 10, 2016 at 10:25 am
Thanks. I’d need to add a line about drinking.
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December 10, 2016 at 10:34 am
Love this!
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December 10, 2016 at 10:37 am
Thanks, Triple S.
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December 10, 2016 at 9:37 pm
Good job, Monkey.
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December 10, 2016 at 9:45 pm
Just like a chimp.
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December 31, 2016 at 4:37 pm
Wow! Just wow!!!
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December 31, 2016 at 4:52 pm
Well, that’s a nice reaction. You made my day.
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